tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6020468150190614824.post5157170107534073505..comments2024-02-11T03:43:54.770-05:00Comments on Wendy Ramer - On 'n On 'n On: On the Bridge (Or, Finally time to tell the tale)Wendy Ramer, Authorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17430380409796887696noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6020468150190614824.post-12769159251699444452010-10-10T01:03:38.812-04:002010-10-10T01:03:38.812-04:00Wendy...It was beautiful. Eerie. Lovely. Well d...Wendy...It was beautiful. Eerie. Lovely. Well done!Sharon K. Mayhewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07799235347319851345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6020468150190614824.post-88956806478407632382010-10-09T11:57:56.628-04:002010-10-09T11:57:56.628-04:00So many amazing possibilities here! You should wr...So many amazing possibilities here! You should write this story, Wendy. (On the plane last weekend, I started reading Enzo's Mama. LOVE it! I have to officially finish another book before I can get back to it, and I can't wait!)<br /><br />Hope all's well with you, sweetie!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6020468150190614824.post-49054921399484742952010-10-08T14:55:15.035-04:002010-10-08T14:55:15.035-04:00Beautiful! You drew me to this bridge. :) And I ag...Beautiful! You drew me to this bridge. :) And I agree with Missed Periods, that the third paragraph (minus the but) would be a powerful opening.Samantha Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15712749844855298929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6020468150190614824.post-52744623519400107162010-10-06T20:23:55.645-04:002010-10-06T20:23:55.645-04:00I can almost hear those voices..."the undecip...I can almost hear those voices..."the undecipherable cries of Spanish spirits begging me to stay..."<br /><br />It sounds great, sweetie! (Is it terrible that I'm glad someone else hears voices??)kathrynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06152568985075401447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6020468150190614824.post-40997730582179991002010-10-05T09:45:39.116-04:002010-10-05T09:45:39.116-04:00I love it. It sets such a haunting yet full-of-pos...I love it. It sets such a haunting yet full-of-possibilities scene. I'd def keep reading it. :)kahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10789825860272178765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6020468150190614824.post-83411687928817536012010-10-04T01:49:06.277-04:002010-10-04T01:49:06.277-04:00It's very beautifully written. I would start w...It's very beautifully written. I would start with the third paragraph.Missed Periodshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10343265071637032284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6020468150190614824.post-31845660209985527612010-10-03T16:21:46.676-04:002010-10-03T16:21:46.676-04:00I like how the voices and influence of so much of ...I like how the voices and influence of so much of the past sort of converge with you as you stand at this beautiful place. It kind of opens the door to so much possibility, based on all that happened here before you, and that will certainly follow after you. Very intriguing opening ...Joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972054718663959694noreply@blogger.com